星期三, 4月 25, 2007

Whitney's Commemorative Speech

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annie 提到...

dear whitney:
i've watched your speech and read your draft as well. Your draft is highly composed and it makes the content of your speech successful. Mealwhile, comparing the speeches you gave before, i found you have slow down the pace when you give the speech. Also, you hardly chokek this time. However, the whole speech could be perfect if you could have more eyes contact with the audience.