星期三, 4月 25, 2007

Venny's commemorative Speech

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Lynn 提到...

At First, I am not really know who is 馬兆駿.But the beginning of the speech Venny tell us about his successful life on the stage, and which includes that he made lots of singers famous and he tuned lots of famous songs. On the other hand, she talk about he had lots of contribution toward this society and he was exactly a good man hard to find. This part I think she wants us to know about his background. Furthermore, she tells us Mr. Ma death was because of he went to drugs and was inflicted with alcoholism. He also spent a lot of on those prisoners in jail. Besides, he also looked after those teenagers who drop out from school. Finally, Venny said, Mr. Ma was really a good model for us to follow. That's why we want to commemorative him. And we will still remember him. After Venny's speech, she let me more know who is Mr. Ma. In the speech, I think Venny have to add more feelings of sad or disappointed feelings. And her voice and pronunciation were very good and correct. I can see the Venny prepare this speech very well. Even though, she saw the notes several times at the beginning, she speak this speech was very smoothly. I think she do a good job this time.

Venny 提到...

Actually, I am a little bit disappointed toward this commemorative speech. For the reason that I prepared far more better than what I presented. I think that was because I cared the speech too much so that I was too nervous. Next time, I should practice far better than perfect. Although my speech was not so perfect because of the stammered, I quiet liked the content. I thought that my content was richful and I mentioned how and what the person was deserved our praise. All in all, this is a not bad speech. I believe I will improve more if I work harder.