Every time when I see Michael's presentation, I always think that,"WOw, how could he be so confident." However, this time, Michael was still face the audience with confidence, this is good. But, this is a commemorative speech, his facial expression could show more sadness. As for Michael's draft, he did provide the achivements of James Brown. Even though I am not familiar with James Brown, I could know who he is through Michael's speech. However, he did not explain why the occassion is and why we should commemorate him. He just showed us that how much he admires James Brown and how James Brown affected him. Besides, Michael's voice is loud enough and his eye contact with the audience was really good. Because he memorized most draft, in addition the tiem he looked at his draft, he had good eye contact with his audience. Next time, before the presentation, Michael should make sure that whether the draft really has all requirements.
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Every time when I see Michael's presentation, I always think that,"WOw, how could he be so confident." However, this time, Michael was still face the audience with confidence, this is good. But, this is a commemorative speech, his facial expression could show more sadness. As for Michael's draft, he did provide the achivements of James Brown. Even though I am not familiar with James Brown, I could know who he is through Michael's speech. However, he did not explain why the occassion is and why we should commemorate him. He just showed us that how much he admires James Brown and how James Brown affected him. Besides, Michael's voice is loud enough and his eye contact with the audience was really good. Because he memorized most draft, in addition the tiem he looked at his draft, he had good eye contact with his audience. Next time, before the presentation, Michael should make sure that whether the draft really has all requirements.
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