Speech Training UE3B: Jasmine's Commemorative Speech

星期三, 4月 25, 2007

Jasmine's Commemorative Speech

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Jessie 提到...: I liked the way you started your presentation. I like the beginning sentence, I have nothing, except for LOVE, that you quoted it to start your commemorative speech. I am attracted by it absolutely. Moreover, I think you chose a good figure to accompish your speech. Liu Xia is a commemorative women to commemorate and good example to encourage us that as you've mentioned. However, the whole performance would be better that go with the sincerity. Also, it would be better, if you have more eye-contact with audience that would show us your sincerity and also confidence. Beside, like what Aiden,"no matter how good the content of a speech is, if not delivered effectively could affect the overall performance", I think you have good content, but it would be better, if you use the effective methods to deliver it.; 5/14/2007 9:15 上午

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