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I think Craig did a great job of introducing his speaker. He clearly had thought about it and did a lot of research.Still, I think he should use some body languages during the presrntation,and his tone was a little bit flat, if he could work on this,I bet he would have the best presentation ever!
I think Verna did a good job of her presentation. She gave a very clear introduction of the speaker and also explained clearly to the audiences what related the speaker and the audiences. She was always smiling during her speech. However, I think Verna needs more eye-contact with the audiences. It’s ok to look down the script, don’t look around but your audiences, that makes people think you are nervous.
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I think Craig did a great job of introducing his speaker. He clearly had thought about it and did a lot of research.Still, I think he should use some body languages during the presrntation,and his tone was a little bit flat, if he could work on this,I bet he would have the best presentation ever!
I think Verna did a good job of her presentation. She gave a very clear introduction of the speaker and also explained clearly to the audiences what related the speaker and the audiences. She was always smiling during her speech. However, I think Verna needs more eye-contact with the audiences. It’s ok to look down the script, don’t look around but your audiences, that makes people think you are nervous.
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