星期二, 4月 17, 2007

Jessie's Commemorative Speech



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Jasmine's feedback for Jessie

I like the beginning of Jessie’s commemorative speech. Actually, she did a good job that provided an explanation why Thomas Alva Edison was praiseworthy. On the other hand, Jessie also illustrated the achievements of her subject. This can help her audiences realize how great Thomas Alva Edison was. Overall, Jessie’s speech was fluency. However, it might be better if she could deliver the speech more sincerity. Maybe she still got a bit of nervous, so that she didn’t deliver her speech with ease. In addition, her speech was meaningful, since she provided inspiration or heightened the admiration to the audience for the person a lot. In my opinion, the speech content was good; I will look forward to her next speech. I hope she can show herself with more confidence.


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Jasmine Lee