I am intrested in 楊培安 because one of his song is played in a game I played before. Like what you said, I also think his voice is unique and beauiful. I think your speech has been improved a lot than last semester. Both of the performance and grammar are good. You have mentioned his musical life and achievements but I think you should describe some proper noun such as "TNT" (I don't know what it is), and not to be so nervous.
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I am intrested in 楊培安 because one of his song is played in a game I played before. Like what you said, I also think his voice is unique and beauiful. I think your speech has been improved a lot than last semester. Both of the performance and grammar are good. You have mentioned his musical life and achievements but I think you should describe some proper noun such as "TNT" (I don't know what it is), and not to be so nervous.
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