星期一, 5月 28, 2007

Jessie's Persuasive Speech (Value)

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To be honest, I was so ambivalent to decide my topic at first. “Internet is bad for modern society” is a tough subject to persuade people, because most of people are addicted to computer (or to say Internet) and most of people even can’t live without the Internet. However, the situation is what I want to point out. Besides, I want my audience to put more attention on the negative influences using the Internet, not just focus on the advantages.
I would like to do persuasive speech, because I have to make it sounds well organized and logical. It is challenge! It is hard to find the information for my topic, because most of people think the invention of Internet is good for modern society. Therefore, I organized all my idea and thoughts and write the outline at first and then to find the evidence to support my words.
Generally speaking, I think this is not bad speech, but there are some weakness I need to improve. First, I didn’t perform it with great enthusiasm. Second, I didn’t control the voice modulation well. Third, I should put more attention on the audience when I was saying some strong points. Because of those reasons, I think I still have room to improve on the next speech.